Saturday, September 01, 2007

Remnants of a discarded life

Lay scattered on the floor

Sky a constantly changing blue

All of this inevitable but until then

I want to dance at

Midnight underneath

A full gleaming white moon

Watch stars streak across

The wide expanse of cobalt sky.


January said...

Thanks for stopping by my blog. I enjoyed reading this poem, so vivid and full of possibilities.

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Lori said...

Thank you January!!!!! I will definitely be checking that site you recommended out and visiting your blog often.

Frankie said...

I want to dance there too! Such a wonderful poem! I love this image of your dancing there beneath the freeing, so delicate. Thanks so much for sharing this!

Lori said...

Thank you for reading and commenting Frankie. I hope you come back often and I will definitely visit your blog.